still greet me in the future...
see me pass by and notice my smile that used to be yours
pretend to need me, pretend to love me
i don't care, as long as you are with me
I'm too cold to move and too hot to think
yet i can still cry and feel you in my heart
i never passed through your mind until you saw me that day
and when we stopped and looked at each other we had nothing to say
yet, my heart felt the same when we saw each other last
your face still with the same look you always had, the "your just another person" look
i meant nothing to you, you didn't care how you treated me
your thoughts turned on you and you lost me....
and i am thinking while we pass each other, i thank god, that i turned away
Author notes
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A contest entry
- It takes strength to be gentle and kind by Mr Id.
400 points, ended December 8, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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full of sorrow but somehow strong. i like that.
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A very sorrowful poem indeed.
I hope you are over this slump now.
Nice work and good luck in contest!
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