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Corner Stores in the Snowlight







     



          The neon lights of the world are dancing again in quiet passion
      when I stand with you under the neighborhood drugstore window
    hung with garland and manacled with wreaths,
          lights blinking like old mens' eyes
                It's Christmas time, you know
      the season of dark berry leaves and rockabye dollies
  when we'd huddle telling stories around a phospherescent fire
  and you'd whisper in my ear, little flashes of lightening
            that glowed orangly because we were alone.

Author notes

wellll, it felt like neon at first, then reminded me of Christmas and my love, and fire and dancing little lights and the quintisential corner store at Christmas time.

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  • tara wilson gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    i love this so much, what an absolutely wonderful poem & scene you set.


  • Death of the Author
    December 11, 2008
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    glowed orangly - glowed orange.

    Neat job, thanks for your entry