Enough is enough!
I have had it, being
the bottom of the
food chain...
Today, I'll march
right up to that
mean ole' snake
and show him
I won't be eaten
Not today!
It's about time
the circle has
come full course
and what goes
around, surely
will come around
Today, I stood
in hiding, waiting
to prance upon
him and make the
snake my prey
I always wondered
how they taste
Just as he slithered
by, I jumped his head
and without hesitation
I bit it, clear off
and feasted upon his
delicate, squirming body
mmmmmm....
Gonna invite my friends
over for a big buffet...
Mr. Snake, finally got his...
Author notes
This poem falls under options: A,B and C
Karma is a bitch and does get hers, in the end...
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Comments
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A very creative tale of sorts; the pursuit and the courage to go beyond! What comes around surely goes around - for what you send out comes back to you, whatever that may be. Nicely done!
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Lmao, I am sorry but this was beyond wonderful. I felt as if the mouse came to life, and had words. Every action, greated the vision in my head. When you said the mouse marched, I could picture a little mouse marching. Very well done. The flow was at it's best. This is the kind of creative writing I was looking for :]]
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