Trapped within company, lost in love
day-dreaming divinely about you.
A vision of passion mysterious, tall
turning life's darkest skies blue.
Reaching out; taking my willing hand
his tender pull embracing m'soul.
Expectations deciduous then hard
leaning sweetly into me so bold.
Melting desire of our blended ecstasy
calculated each intimate touch.
He's not loves nefarious phantom my
heart sang, wanting him so much.
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day-dreaming of my love....
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Careful when you start dreaming of someone night and day, always check their bank account first...
I know the feeling of being caught in the everyday trappings of life, when all you can do is dream about where you'd rather be. Company and family is nice, but that's only one kind of love you know.
You write of the emptiness, yet fulfillment of that so well; you make the reader achy-breaky and happy at the same time. Wonderfully done, sweetheart.
I love you,
Brazos
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EXQUISITE
Oh how I love the styling and the wording of this poem.You did try to paint a very picturesque romantic scenery on the reader's mind through this awesome write.WELL DONE!!!
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Spot on....beautifully put
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Beautiful poem novy. Well written. Isn't it great to day dream.
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Wow! Great flow, great use of beautiful words, and wonderful imagery! I love the rhyme (sp?) and can relate to this feeling. Wonderful write! Good luck with future poems and contests!
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