You think you're stuck
And you wonder why
How could this be
What God had in mind?
But you've gotta know
That you
You're gonna go far kid
Reach for the stars, kid
You're gonna get our of this life
Where you cry
You're gonna relax, enjoy the ride
And I know you're really gonna fly
Just take my hand
And I'll help you stand
But that's all I'll do
Cause it's now up to you
Yeah, yeah, yeah!
You're gonna go far kid
Reach for the stars, kid
You're gonna get our of this life
Where you cry
You're gonna relax, enjoy the ride
And I know you're really gonna fly
I'll see you soon
Oh, baby mine
Someday when
Your name's all up in lights
Cause you..
You're gonna go far kid
Reach for the stars, kid
You're gonna get our of this life
Where you cry
You're gonna relax, enjoy the ride
And I know you're really gonna fly
A contest entry
- Found/Find/Finding Youself! (with 680 points) by Dreamer42morrow.
650 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"Just take my hand / And I'll help you stand
But that's all I'll do / Cause it's now up to you" <<--those were my favorite lines. I really did like this!! Ahmazing message. I'm considering adding this to the finals, but....it looks like a song. Is it one? Just wondering.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
~Mariah!~
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I like the intensity of the staments and the poetic flow you created to depict the emotiosn one by one and made it very intimate and very expressive as well..well said..
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