When faith in myself
Was crashing to Hell's gate
He held me up, so I wouldn't fall
Why he loves me, I'll never understand
Why he cares for me, I'll never comprehend
"I'm no good to anyone"
Was running through my head
But he fought back the demons
So I could breath again
And for that, he is my savior
A contest entry
- These Feelings I Feel by Lagrimas.
563 points, ended December 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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god ddamn good poem! excellent job!!!
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Questions will always exist. That's a fact that often matters more than the answers. For that, doubt can cost far more than the certainty.
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Hold on
Love like this is so precious that when it's found you all you can do is hold on. Great write, thank you and good luck. -
Humm..a intimate truth you shared while refering the journey of this life and its troubles around ..very imaginative poetry ..thanks for sharing...
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