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might be ...

They might be tears upon waterless moon
expressions of loneliness spread over ages
bold lover's first tempting kiss fallen to cold absence;

they might be illusive mysteries
markings of once-upon winds
but long untouched remainders
make the scene a memory, not a dream.

Moon is a mirror of our best
hopes and wishes have risen
and in the constant gleam we imagined
answers to questions of hearts, grown
deep as her shimmered ebony sea;

but when the eye finds beauty of night
and the skies hold the center of thought
we cannot forget what we have started
and what we sought to be.

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    I love this! It is a peacefull shimmering hope of a love that will always be!!!


  • kaibab silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    To know the universe as free and dancing,
    near and far is eyes of crystal,
    grows our closer understanding
    to what is heart inside a footprint...

    lovely poem and love contest


  • Canto-Brasileiro
    December 3, 2008

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    Or as the good old poet once said, and he was probably in a bad mood: 'just a satellite'.
    But here in your verses, it comes as it is, beautiful.


  • Rowan gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is so hopeful, and beautiful. And I know I use that word alot with your work, sorry... but it's so.