Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

When The Hunters Are Now The Hunted


                                            Now this is a change of unfortunate events
                                  When the hunters are being hunted,by their own prey.
                                        What used to be dominant is now the underdogs
                            This is what happens when you bite off too much for you to chew.
                                                      And  you end up dien'
                                                  Payback sucks doesn't it?!?!?!

A contest entry

What do u think? be honest...im semi new at this poetry think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • CharleeBoy
    December 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Just the kind of irony I was looking for, very well written. The ending is priceless, you really made everything come to life through words. Good job, keep it up.

    Thanks for entering.