Holding Together.

Whispering sweet nothings,
holding together.

Through my heart
is a rainbow of emotions.
Over-ruled by grey.

Tears glisten in dark eyes.
Why must I hurt you so.

You stick by me,
on the promise we'll try.

If only,
to fly away from here.

But it's not our fault.

And so to cliche,
love will conquer all.

Whispering sweet meaning,

Holding together.

Author notes

Option 4. - Word Bank
- Rainbow
- Together
- Glisten
- Grey
- Fly
- Whisper (ing)

A contest entry

With prompts in mind..... by Hannie. 700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Fritz O skennick
February 23, 2009

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Great stuff!!!
And well deserving of that silver shiny you be sporting there...
Strong, heartfelt narrative that made for a compelling read...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
misterfish
December 5, 2008

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WOW
I love it. This is such a brilliant poem. As always, your emotions always shine through. Absolutely beautiful.
Hannie
December 3, 2008
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Geez i didnt even notice it was u, dani untill afta i commented lol. Thanks for entering!!!!
Hannie
December 3, 2008

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Awesome poem. A very great write. Also a great take to the prompt. Good luck in the contest and thanks heaps for enetering.

Hannie.