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Undeserving.


He is perfect.
    Too perfect.

                Everything any girl could dream of.

He is mine.
    And yet I hurt him.

Why.



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Option 3.
Tell me in 20 words about your love.


Exactly 20 words

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    February 23, 2009

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    Awesome...

    Great take on the prompt & great use of your 2o words...
    Profound thoughts expressed in so few words...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • Hannie
    December 3, 2008

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    Awesome poem dani. Great write. Im glad u can count to 20 thats a great start...haha jks. Great poem thanks heaps for entering!!!

    Hannie.