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Winter

The river runs through the snow covered trees
In the midst of mid-winter night dreams.

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river, snow, trees, winter

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  • penman gold member
    March 20
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    excellent

    What a great write. so very well expressed. Wonderful choice of ten words.


  • Neha Sharma silver member
    December 22, 2008

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    wow, this is beautiful. very nicely done. Thanks for the entry. Good luck
    -Neha

  • MysteriousStrangerX
    December 5, 2008

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    hmm...who says good poetry has to be long?!

    i enjoyed this...for some reason the word "sanctuary" popped up in my head while reading this...maybe it's just me

    awesome write my friend

    keep it up