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Insecure

Trust, Forbidden
Compliments, False
Insults, Genuine
Beauty, Nonexistant
Imperfections, Magnified
Actions, Smothered with Doubt.
~I.N.S.E.C.U.R.E~

Im NOT finished this. so please leave constructive comments

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  • spirit rising
    December 7, 2008

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    i read this before and didnt relize i never commented, i do like this, it is short and to the point, well done


  • Simone Brooklyn
    December 4, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this poem. It is simple, but that's what makes it good. It says a lot in those simple words. Great job!


  • HopeForUnity
    December 4, 2008

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    dought should be doubt
    other than that, this was an absolute knockout.
    well done


  • Sushi Darville
    December 3, 2008
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    In line six, do you mean "Doubt"?