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Autumn Skies Watched

autumn skies watched her,
rip apart all she knew.
through her fingertips,
the pieces blew.

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    ah, I like how you fit a rhyme in this short piece. this is just lovely

    good luck