Youth is like a daylily,
a morning glory blossom is the heart;
the soul is like a tree, evergreen.
True love, a mysterious moonflower,
fragrant and shining.
Author notes
18. Life
Olivia33
A contest entry
- Titles, Word Prompt, Pictures, Quotes, Song Title :] by sophia moonfairy.
1100 points, ended December 6, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time to upgrade those green shinies again! by Nicada.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
This is a beautiful write,and you have used some wonderful metaphors here. Very nice poem,and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
-
I like the way you compared to the daylilly.Very creative though I see what you are saying and have to agree.This was written really well and the words were effective and got to the heart of what you were wanting to say.Great job.I do not think that I would change anything.
-
-
Thanks!
Have a good weekend
-
-
Perfect comparisons---
but each fragile in its own particular way,
as needing water, sun and love!
Really great!!!!
-
Wow, good write. I like the metaphores (at least I think thats what they are called) Great Work. Good luck in the contest.
-
-
My poem was partially inspired by "Reflective" by A. R. Ammons:
I found a
weed
that had a
mirror in it
and that
mirror
looked in at
a mirror
in
me that
had a
weed in it
-
-
this is great! its extremely beautiful. i love the flow and you used your words so beautifully. i really like how you compare these things to flowers.
i really enjoyed reading this, thank you so much for sharing.
-
Wow this is soo. beautiful I like it a lot this is very creative :] and so true I enjoyed reading this and thanks for taking your time on entering and I really like the title very unique. this is Awesome
so good luck in the contest and
Many blessing and love
~Maria~
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
