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Winter Love

Frosty white branches
Of whipped creamy goodness
Wave in the winds
In a winter’s night dance

Delectably delightful
Little snow angels
Skip across blankets
Of frost sheltered land

Icy winds redden
The noses on faces
As children hip hop
Dodging orbs made by hand

Inside fires blaze
Sending smoke out of chimneys
While cocoa is sipped
With family and friends

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I wrote this for a contest but was too late to enter.

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  • BeautifulXxDisaster silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    wow this is so beautifully penned dear! Too bad you couldn't make it to the contest, I bet it would've be a winner!


  • Denierim
    December 9, 2008

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    I'm sorry you didn't make it to the contest. But this is definately a beautiful portrey of all the good things winter holds inside. We got some snow here today so this fits this date so perfectly. Thank you for giving me this warm wintery feeling! ^_^


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    December 8, 2008

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    Such a wonderful display of winter, you have created here...loved the imagery...excellent write...


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 8, 2008

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    What a beautiful setting here!
    Lovely work and sorry you didn't make it
    into that contest. I am sure that there
    will be another one that you can enter it
    into shortly. Thanks for sharing this one!




    Jeremy0826


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    This is very beautiful. You did an excellent job with the imagery. I wish you had been able to enter. But it was a great poem.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

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