Their Life was one; as they lived blissfully, no worries no strife, just completely carefree.
But little did they know just how sneaky life can be.
Until the day that life turned on them completely.
No more were the late night giggles and pillow play
Those times were put off... for some other day.
Days turned to weeks and so on, into the years.
Something had changed and that had become too clear.
He was aloof, dealing with guilt
She was full of upset, filled to the hilt.
Emotions were stong and took total control of both of their worlds, killing their love painful and slow.
Mistakes were made that couldn't be taken back,
They found themselves under each others attack.
Suddenly she was alone... he was taken too soon,
Now living in Gods peaceful embrace.
Happy for him, sorry for them... but she now understands. Together again, they will be in the same place.
Husband and Wife through death and in life.
Author notes
fresh write due to bug
A contest entry
- In Honor Of My 50th Gold Trophy On AP by BluesMan.
3000 points, ended February 27, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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After the dust clears from a chaotic relationship ending in death, Whateever the cause of the chaos.... It always pales in comparrison when you realize the depth of your loss. Thaank you for entering my contest
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How's thatsaying go?
You never what you got till it's gone?
Thank you for your comment and read, I had forgotten all about this.
It's funny read some old poetry and think oh darn what was I thinking? I can do better! LOL
Anyway, thanx again and I hope all is well with you and you are feeling better.
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This is such a great poem ,and should be a winner, the ending was most apt, the flow and rthym great as always, I see the muse returning, love and blessings John
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i like this poem and i can't really say why, too early in the morning, but i like that ending, a wonderful thought, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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