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Daddy!

The word is music to my ears.
I've waited years to be called that.
Once upon a time, I had a feeling
That I would go my entire life
Without having that title.
Then, you came along.
It turned out to be the perfect match.
You needed a father figure.
I desperately wanted to be a father.
Now, I look forward to all our chats
Just so I can hear that one word.
You turned my world upside down
In more ways than one.
We've had more than our share of conflicts,
All of which I feel very bad about
Because I never mean to do anything to hurt you.
Still, I've happily greeted this role
The same way I greet you each morning:
With open arms.
Now and forever, thanks to you,
I will be known as the one thing
That I wanted to be:
A Daddy!




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Dedicated to the poet who made this contest possible: my AP & real-life daughter, shattering gypsy. Thank you for everything. I love you, my little girl.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    March 20

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    This is a wonderful poem and it is wonderfully written. It gave me the chills, it had touched my heart, And it was a pleasure to read.


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    A beautiful poem you have penned for Mylee. A delight to read. I see she loves it. Take care. Blessings.

    Best of iuck,
    Aunt Sandy


  • simplefarmgirl
    December 2, 2008

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    awww! That's so sweet!!! I love it!

    Does it have the same effect if I say step-daddy?

    hahaha...or not... :-P


  • movedon
    December 2, 2008
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    AHHHHHHHHH

    IM SOBBING!!!

    So, DADDY, i just wanted to say thanks for entring the contest! and, DADDY, your the best DADDY in the entire world DADDY DADDY DADDY!!!

    I LOVE YOU!


  • movedon
    December 2, 2008

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    wow

    protective?

    hahha ok so i made a list of contest titles, and of course, you get this one, and i swear it was random

    "Daddy"

    NOW...........WRITE!

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