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They say it’s gonna rain today.

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They say it’s gonna rain today.
Weathermen across the county
predict a deluge (what they say).
Tho’ all of them do not agree

‘bout the exact length of this storm
or even when it will occur.
But just in case, stay safe and warm,
‘cause it’s-a-comin’ that’s for sure;

water rising high, and shucks,
spilling o’er the Shenandoah.
So keep your eyes open for ducks,
big arks, and old guys named Noah.




                 ~r.

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© Dec. 2, 2008, R.G. Braley (astralshepherd)
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  • My Nemesis
    December 2, 2008

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    I liked the ending. It made me chuckle. With all that is going on in this world right now (or at least in my part of it) I found myself thinking about the political situation here in Canada, and the financial crisis.


    • astralshepherd gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thanks

      Yes, you got the sense of what i was attempting to say. Blessings and best wishes,


  • Nicada silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is a very enjoyable poem and very original. I love the picture and the background too! Nice Write! Second stanza should say "but" instead on "bit." Blessings, Patty

    • astralshepherd gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank-you

      thanks for the assist - my old eyes missed that bit-but thing, they look real similar when the vision fades.
      blessings and best wishes,


  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 2, 2008

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    Will do, hahaha, its been raining all my life but still I manage to stay dry..so let it come lol a good read

    • astralshepherd gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment

      I am pleased you enjoyed the poem and i agree with the positive outlook you have....may you continue to stay safe, and dry. Blessings and best wishes,

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