I'm the girl who waits for you through challenges life may throw
the girl who will always love you no matter what your differences may be
I won't be the one to laugh at you when you have a clumbsy moment I will be there
to assure you everything will be fine
I'm the girl who will wait for ever just to find the perfect gentleman
the girl who will kiss away all of your pain
I will never leave you to get home alone when you are plastered
I will always love you for who you are not what you are not
Let me be your one and only. Give me a chance to prove
that i can be the love of your life.
Let me try to kiss away your pain.
Heal the wounds from the past.
Love you like no other
Baby if you are willing get lost in my embrace
*whispers softly* I Love You
A contest entry
- Seduction of the mind. Females Preferred. by HomeGrown.
1000 points, ended December 26, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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something like this...
could make a person fall in love WITH love when they feel like there's no reason to love anymore...
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Still very natural, and yet, much more complete. Best of luck to you!
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I love the open flow, and the simple honesty of this, but to be honest, it's like finding an unfinished letter. Any chance of expansion? More details perhaps? Again, it's so natural, it's almost spooky!
HG
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