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Frost Flowers

Snowflakes,
falling petals
of frost flowers
unveil the winter sky,
Till
the light of heaven
falls softly
onto our world

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  • hugs and kissies
    December 21, 2008
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    beautiful thank you for entering the contest good luck

  • Judith Chandler
    December 3, 2008

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    "unveil the winter sky" - That's a nice image and "light of heaven" give the piece a spiritual quality.

  • harriet567
    December 3, 2008

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    Lovely

    Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem - I can feel the softness of the snow and I love the thought 'the light of heaven falls softly onto our world'. I also like the title 'Frost Flowers' - well written.


  • januaryrain gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Snowflakes,
    falling petals
    of frost flowers

    Well done


  • Olivias Violin
    December 2, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    frost flowers - how perfect!


    • Rose-Quartz
      December 2, 2008
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      Thankyou Olivia, Your kind words are much appreciated. What a lovely comment about my poem. Thanks again. With all my very best wishes from Rose xx P.S. I Love your avatar picture

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