my daughter's rolled up jeans
shows blue on black,
such way a carnation should grow
from that flowerbed she climbs
after making it more comfortable
one hum of something
but we know can't wash away the label of life
accomodate as waiting tag in autumn even
while I can't compete with those birds' chirps
with satisfaction I wanted to see
folks there's a lullaby in knowing light will return
and helpful to heart it is
penetration enabling full opening spectrum
source to reflect strength
love as cheerful reminder
how it's waning not raining absence of sunshine
opportunity yet for tension to not be rhythm
yet for emergency straggling wants us to merge gentler
so grasshopper jumps off siding it doesn't want to be taken in
with my walking by as embryo might beg for no miscarriage
though I won't see move of my shiver head up guidance to free family if body
A contest entry
- the colorful thread ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Humm..as usual you make me astonish by the move and the experimental immagery with so much depth and yes with so much strongness of your thought as well..well done...
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PrabhuDayal Khattar thanks for being kind while I find ~
I'm grateful I can share what overlaps for me when I see your prompts, I had hoped this didn't become unknit by the kit --
an asterisk needs phrasing,
called Carolyn
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