Caroling on Christmas eve
Hot cocoa warms my heart
Remembering the birth
Is why Christmas has a special part
Shepherds came with gifts of love
Traveling across the land
Manger in Bethlehem
A baby Christ was born
Son of God
A contest entry
- cristmas by hugs and kissies.
400 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing.
i think this was actually really good. should be made into a carol. -
beautiful thank you for entering the contest good luck
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This is good. I liked it. It reminds me of my home back in Iowa where I grew up. Our church would do activities for Christmas and they were always fun. thanks again for the reminder of the real reason for Christmas. There are so many that have forgotten the rea reason and others just dont care! Great job
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Really good writing going on here.The message and thoughts that you ingrain on the reader is great.What Christmas is all about.You did a great job and sorry to see you didn't win.
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Wow this is beautiful. You always do acrostics so wonderfully but this one is probably my favorite so far. You really do amaze me.
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I just love reading your acrostics. You always do them so well.
Good luck in the contest my friend.
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I like this form. Has to be a challenge to make all the lines tie together. You've done a good job and have embodied the purest meaning behind the upcoming holiday. Good luck in the contest.
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thanks for your comments and help
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