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heart broken

heart broken i wonder amilessly
life lost among the streets
i wonder where i'll be
whether the one i used to love will come bak
or whether the one i haven't met will come soon
all i know is that what i used to have is gone now
and now he hauts my mind
invading never to leave
memories of what was and what we could become
still linger near
i can't take it!
trying to live my life like everything is all right
i can't do it anymore
i tried to hard in the past wrapped up in my lies
that my life was happy and everything was okay
but really my heart was aching, my arms were bleeding
now i can't trust amybody else
all because he hurt me bad
all i need is relief.

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  • Court.
    May 13

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    Wow.

    I really disagree with the person that commented before me. I like this poem. I love how phrased certain things, it put the meaning in a new and creative way.

  • ur poem su-cks ballz