don't move to fast baby
if you don't know where you're going to go
where would you like to go anyways?
because i cant tell when you speak, no
you tell us so many different things
its hard to know what to do
&& girl, who are you lying to
the fools your fooling or you?
you say you want to change your life around
yet you keep standing still
you dream of that perfect girl
but which girls heart do you truly want to steal?
so have another drink to forget everything
but its not going to bring you happier days
&& all i wish is that i could do something
if anything its your thoughts not your heart that betrays
so, don't move to fast baby
if you don't know where you're going to go
where would you like to go anyways?
because i cant tell when you speak, no
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Ur background is my page's....lol
Awesome job! I really felt the emotion behind this piece! An A+ job! Keep up the awesome work adn thanks so much for the share! I really am looking forward to reading more of your work....which I probably have already............ I read a lot of stuff on here and try to comment on everyones....Sorry for my mindless ramblings.............HAHA!!!!!
Again.....Thanks so much for the brilliant write and share! Good luck with future writes....but judging from this, you don't really need much luck!!!!!
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aww... pretty hunn <3
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i love it alot its awsome
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i can realy picture this in my head. your poetry is amazing. thanks for posting!
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Although this is kind of sad this is a wonderful write that has been written well.
you say you want to change your life around
yet you keep standing still
you dream of that perfect girl
but which girls heart do you truly want to steal?
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Awww, it's sad in a way. However, it is a beautiful poem.Being a fence sitter is horrible. It creates hatred in others an tons of pain.
This is an awesome poem!
much happiness...
becca
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nice i like this alot =] at first with the title i thought of the song.. boy was i wrong.. lol
"o have another drink to forget everything
but its not going to bring you happier days
&& all i wish is that i could do something
if anything its your thoughts not your heart that betrays" is def my favorite part =]
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Eerily familiar
The title, of course. But also the idea of someone sitting on the fence, stuck and cannot get off and make a choice. I can relate.
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