little singing bird,
you are so very cute,
singing all day long,
cuccing like a flute
Oh! I love your strains,
it amuse me so,
stay with me sweet bird,
I won't let you go.
I will give thee sweet,
all you like to eat,
I wont let you fly,
not even'n the street,
what is wrong with you,
why you can not stay,
Do not stop singing,
this is not the way!
Ok sing your song,
as long as you like,
fly awy to home then,
see you friend, Good Night!
What did you think
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another good one by U.very well rhyming poem. having nice rhythm.too
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Hmm that's really fun and the interesting part is that you can sing it. Wonderful effort I loved it. But the best part was:
"I will give thee sweet,
all you like to eat,
I wont let you fly,
not even'n the street,"
The whole poem was lovely lol keep it up!!! And Thanks for sharing such a cute, soft and sweet piece with us. Anyways
~~~~Good Luck~~~~
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This is a good poem. To me it describes when you meet people for the first time, then people change. The bird to me symbolizes a lot of my friends when they realize how crazy I am.
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Birds do not always do what we would like them to do, especially the wild birds. It is probably best to let them fly away, and just appreciate them when they stop and sing. Good work.
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Very good write. I'm a fan of rhyme so I love how you used it. Although, not all birds have a melodious tune, but wonderful job with imagery.
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Welcome to All Poetry
A very creative write. I did however get a little confused with the meanings, it seems to start of positive but then turn negative and finished positive again. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Sarah
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Nice thoughts
so you have great love for singing birds.
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