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02 December [Unfinished]

I kind of want you
To open them and see
The streams of poems
For you written by me
With Heart felt emotion
And Hidden I love yous
My love it seems
Growing quicker than Bamboo
With my list of 40 things
Shell said you'd freak
I wasn't brave enough
Posting it took a week
I just want you to see
I want you to understand
I want you to feel it
Like I do firsthand

Tell me what you think, I really do want some honest feedback

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  • JakeAnAlyssa
    December 9, 2008
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    this is good..
    well writen...