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She Makes Me Feel So Good

There is a girl
Who walks my dreams
The sweetest girl
I’ve ever seen

And when she talks to me
I feel so young and free

I want to dance

I want to laugh

I want to jump for joy
Acting just like a boy

I want to dance

o

There is a girl
With hair of gold
She doesn’t know
I never told

Yet when she walks with me
I feel so young and free

I want to dance
I want to laugh

I want to jump for joy
Acting just like a boy

I want to dance

o

There is a girl
With eyes of blue.
Whose heart is pure
Whose heart is true

And when she smiles at me
I feel so young and free

I want to dance
I want to laugh

I want to jump for joy
Acting just like a boy

I want to dance

o

Her laughter’s Bright
Her smile is sweet
She’ll knock you right
Right off your feet

Now that she lives with me
I feel so young and free

I want to dance

I want to laugh

I want to jump for joy
Acting just like a boy

I want to dance

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  • truembrace silver member
    January 30, 2009

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    this is such an uplifting poem / lyrics. I had the same thought as Janice with the repetition and thought that the word pattern for tempo was perfect.

    so well done and left a smile on my face to read something of good spirits.

    hope all is well with fighting this ice we have as of late.

    be well,
    Kim


  • Janice M Pickett
    December 2, 2008

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    awwww so sweet. This is different from your usual writes. very different. But I did enjoy it. I thought it could be a song??


    • DennisP1
      December 3, 2008
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      You are correct Jan, I wrote it as lyrics to a song I had going on in my head.
      As you may have noticed there are three tempos.. The first starts as a slow romantic waltz then picks up tempo as you do a few swings and spins then faster as you pull apart and dance free.. the breaks are to extend that until it restarts with a waltz as the couple come together again the male whispering the words in his girls ear.