Washed around me into this night.....
French daggers for plastic hearts hold this silence tight.
Intrigue digs breathless trenches, I'm beginning to see you.
Lasting....Flashing....Destructive
We infiltrate into places where ice flowers and troubled designs set their sight on me.
So flag me down, and I'll scream its silence naturally.
Blame....Audacity....Synthetic Truth.......I think you've reached me.
Are things starting to affect some sort of pattern?
Inside out, I see through and through.
Angelic Distortion, never did I Feel So Real.
Time's beckon call grabs me.....and when the noise lets its victim free,
Those lovely feathers of your dress keep me warm.
Breathless insincere sensations boom their haunts....
The glittering golden falsehood, shatters to rebel dust.
Comments
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This write has emotion spilling over onto the freeway its whizzng down. So many things take place within these lines, and the chaos seems to complete it!! Amazing write!!!


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I like this.
Alot going on in this write, but it is good. Some good choice of words.
Good expression of your thoughts and all (:



