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A contest entry

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 20, 2008
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    I like the way that you have used words that relate to you to create this name-acrostic although I do think that maybe if you expanded on it a little more it could be more engaging to the reader - as it is though it is very clever

    Merry Christmas!

    Polly


  • Anna Emkah
    December 6, 2008

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    An Acrostic of only 6 words forming your name "Elaina". Nicely done, but I am not sure if I understand what you are telling the reader with these words. Could you please tell me? Have you not yet finished it?
    Anna.


  • greyhaime
    December 3, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    welcome to the site, and thanks for sharing this with us here, this is an interesting poem you have... good luck to you in the contest.
    cheers