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My Life-- My Way

Take a step
Trip and fall
Pick yourself up
And walk on

This is my life
This is my way
This is what I chose and I follow trough

Take my life
Looks this way
Never saw
Looked trough

Cold eyes with cold shoulder
Never knowing what is showing on a pleasant face
I wanna be me and be free

No more wandering what is going on
No more wandering trough my life
Without a goal at the end

I wanna find my way
Take a step
Trip and fall
I wanna pick myself up
And walk on

This is my life
This my way
This is what I chose and I follow trough

In the end I will sing
It is just another thing
For me to try to do
For me to fail at
Just like the world said

Author notes

this is for 100th poem the 200 one day i want 1000 from there who knows what will be my overall goal

i have not been able to write for awhile so im rusty if its bad tell me

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  • Dark Dragon of fire
    December 10, 2008

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    kewl

    choose your path listen to no one more, be what you will like ever before. live your life with no regret, and you'll know your life is truly set.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    You've said it sweetheart! It's all about picking ourselves up each time we fall.. and about finding our path and following that through!

    Really like the sentiment in this write



  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Congrats hunni...wow nice milestone 1000 poems Not impossible A very neat write, trying is half the battle sometimes, I try not to look on it as failure, more another way it won't work, so I keep going till I find a way that does Again congrats!


  • Broken - Doll silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    I really liked this. And congratulations for reaching 100 poems!

    This is a nice piece, I like the way it is a reflection, like a look back on things. It has a nice feel to it.