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Finding hell

Oh God
I think I have
Finaly found hell
The world
Is burning up
And the
Scent of death
Is so close
But funny thing is
This place used
To be my heaven
But this new feeling
Is just killing me
A fire is burning
Inside my soal
God it's
Starting to scorch
My heart
And the ground
Is falling
From under me

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  • meggie94x
    December 3, 2008
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    NO NO NICOLE! I WAS HER DICTIONARY FIRST

    and yes good =P


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    December 2, 2008
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    *finally
    *soul

    otherwise goodgood.
    -from ur personal dictionary