I felt you in my legs before we even touched,
And baby I wont let you be my rebound,
You mean more to me than that.
Yea, baby, we have depth and bring meaning to ‘us’.
I don’t want to rush this
‘cause when I’m with you my souls on fire,
Like being alive for the first time;
Oh baby, I just might love you.
And oh baby you’ve got me yearning for more
Oh-so-tempting
Yea, love, you are
But you bring out the best in me,
And when we go that far,
I want it to be right.
I wonder how long I can last without feeling your skin on mine.
Oh baby, how wrong I was to stay with him,
When you were here all along.
And I never knew happiness could be so breathtaking.
Author notes
This is total bullshit, this guy I wrote this about is a religous lieing bastard. End of story. Not that theres anything wrong with someone being religous, he is just damn pushy and i'm not changing shit for him.
Please tell me what you think
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good for you.
I wish you the best, I so remember these feelings.
Go for it love,
cant be too bad after all this, huh?
Love always,
Jin
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This was really sweet and very heartfelt.. something that many people I'm sure can relate to.. You expressed yourself very well.. Thank you very much for sharing
Angel
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well done
can feel your emotion great job
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awesome!
I really liked this poem. You get the sense that you've fallen head over heals for this person, yet at the same time have the discipline to hold back just a little, as if the past made you wiser.
I'm there myself right now, and we're "waiting" a bit longer until we further ourselves. The torture!!!! That's what I was thinking of when I read this.
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Great write...very deep loving
God bless
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this is great!
its a beautifully written piece.
i love this, it is a great read.
your Faerie
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i like. a lot. and i'm flattered and touched that you think so highly of me
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i know that feeling...well done keep em coming
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This is beautiful.
Dirty pretty.
i loved it!
Great job!
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i like it it is very to the point and not to mention very romantic
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I can really connect with this piece, as am going through something similar
It's inspired me to write something of my own
It's a wonderful write, and 'I never knew happiness could be so breathtaking'
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wow, really passionate. i like it.
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wow
wow that was neat i like it, it has a nice flow and it shows how much he means to you i love it
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