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My First Christmas Poem of the Year

I'm not afraid of the dark tonight,
Because it brings with it the twinkling lights.
Local choirs, singing soft.
The tree is up, the star's aloft.
Catch me beneath the mistletoe
Let it snow, oh let it snow.
Carve the turkey, pour the wine.
We're celebrating Christmastime!

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, short, sweet and to the point, and filled with Christmas spirit, good luck in my contest, Josie


    • Kikai Ni
      December 10, 2008
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      Thanks. I think the Christmas spirit is a very simple thing. Thanks for wishing me luck!


  • hugs and kissies
    December 3, 2008
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    very good very good


  • Demington
    December 2, 2008

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    Good stuff

    Festive and light hearted, this is a good start to the season.

    I would like to see what you'd think up if you had to write a poem made up purely of concrete images...the insignificant details of the season.

    I liked this one whole bunches.

    Blessings,

    Colby


    • Kikai Ni
      December 3, 2008
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      I know it's rather simple, but I tried to maintain a kind of true love feeling; soft and happy and rowdy all at once.

      Elaborate on that and maybe I will ^-^

      Wishing you well,

      Natalie


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 2, 2008

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    i know what i can say and that is that i like this poem my friend, reminds me of x-mas past, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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