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My One-Sided, Up-Ended Nursery Rhyme Horror

Let me leave this one-sided lullaby
Part from your up-ended Fairy tale romance,
Nursery Rhyme Horror story befitting my mind
crazy mixed up be littling of truth.

Trace my life from Sleeping beauty,
into the beginning of your happy ever after.
Which reality proclaism is my real fantasy
Actually, it's a tragic blood filled nightmare

The Seven Dwarves touched Tinkerbell
while Snow White strip-teased the Brothers Grimm
On the other side Cinderella slapped her stepsisters Ass,
And Prince Charming kissed King Arthur, in a blush.

Perversion of the surreal,
Actuallity becomes mundane existence,
when what you believed was true and lovely,
Becomes that which is detested and taboo.

Author notes

I was listening to Jason Mraz and Panic!@the Disco, oh, and FallOut Boy, and this is what my mind came up with. The last stanza was just written as an afterthought to end the poem.

Be scathing, my darlings....

hmm..

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  • Veronica-Armijo
    December 16, 2008

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    Nice!

    I like what you're doing here and how you push past the boundaries of what people usually see. Very intense. Very nice.


  • KytKitsune
    December 4, 2008
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    O.O Hmmm... this is a strange thing. But, it holds its own beauty, in an uncannily beautiful way


  • PureRomance
    December 2, 2008

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    Wow, this is really good, so many of those romance classics can be twisted and yet maybe uncanny, maybe true, but it leaves the mind to wonder could it really have been like this? Thank you for coming up with this and I look forward to reading much more from.