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[ Bipolar ]

BIPOLAR
It comes from within
The true you
What you thought
would remain hidden

That you weren't angelic
Simply a demon
The split personality of mind
An ancient relic

The true you
Built on lies


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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    I found this to be an interesting take on the prompt. The last two lines of your poem hit with such power. excellent job with your poem also.

    good luck
    kat


  • Candy6
    December 2, 2008

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    I have Bipolar disorder. I am not alone. I am so glad you wrote this poem. This poem is a good write.