I'll bleed it out to let you know,
this is the very end.
And you can break the very heart
that never would bend.
And know that inside that pulsing heart,
something lies within.
And piece of you that just today
has shriveled to an end.
A stinging song of yesterday
that cuts me to the core,
Came to me, sadly beating down
my fragile broken door.
And with a gust of open wind,
it lies within my soul,
I found a piece of you in me,
that fell into the blackest hole.
And with a sigh, a dying life,
wrapped into an ending flame,
Set forth to be the very end,
of neverending shame.
And with one sweep of decreasing breeze,
I found this new solution.
And with one gasp of dying breath,
I start a revolution.
A contest entry
- The Best Poet of The Week...... Enter your best poem! by Daisy Ballerina.
520 points, ended January 6, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a sad peace and interesting write this is a wonderful write and very sad thank you for entering and congrats on the trophy
~GOOD LUCK~
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Thank you for entering my contest!!
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So sad... I love your efforts to create this... masterpiece...
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hellz to the yea! and i tried to reply to yours, but my computer is being such a fag today.
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It's okay. But I replied to mine. So there's another message on there.
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yea i saw it! stupid computer drank the water....
anywayz. yea i don't listen to much ludo, so i didn't really catch that one! but i got the others! WOOT GO ME!
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put these guys here!
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this is flipping FANTASTIC!!!! i thought of linkin park. i thought of paramore. i thought of hanson. i thought it was SCHWEETASTICALLY AMAZING.
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Thank you! THANK YOU!
OMG. I wrote it in like... two minutes. I'm so proud of it. And I'm so ecstatic that you like it!!!
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liked it? I LOVED IT!
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I thought it was pretty amazing myself.
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Oh. And I can see how you saw all three bands. But you missed one. Ludo.
The stinging song of yesterday comes from the lyrics "Sadly stinging me with songs from yesterday" in Such As It Ends by Ludo.
Yeah. The references are everywhere.
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