I lie here on your bed
Where I am; unkown
A woman lost and alone
Stripped of clothes
With it my dignity fled
Crying and simply wanting to go home
I am EMPTY
everything known is gone
and YOU the CRIMINAL
took my happiness and dreams
and left me with this scarred memory
and with one single tear
You were gone
Author notes
This was inspired by a picture for a quickie PIF contest "Weeping Nude" by Edvard Munch.a woman is lieing on a bed naked with her hair in her face. It gave me the feeling that she is raped. so this poem was inspired by that and gave the subtle feeling of being lost and having something taken away from her simply for the attacker to disappear. I don't know what to title it seems I have been doing that wirh a lot of recent poems.
contest she gave away her v=card because she thought it had expired
AQUAMAN
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie: Picture Prompt: 30-60 words. by chilali.
550 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - She Gave Away Her V-Card. She Thought It Expired [[ quote prompt ]] by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended January 8, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great poem but i dont see how she gave it away becuase it expired in your poem it was taken so to me this didnt fit the prompt but as a poem it was well done
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Interesting take on the prompt. Thank you for your entry and good luck. This was very beautifully written
Deep and intriguing.
Much love
Ylova
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great
this poem is really good. i have poems sorta like it. check em out and tell me what you think.
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