To the girl whose beauty is present in all seasons
I tell you why you are beautiful, here are the reasons:
Your beauty extends into the heavens,
it goes on forever and never lessens.
Even when the clouds heighten
you are here and the world brightens.
You are like a fruit that constantly ripens
your beauty continues to grow no mater what happens.
My fondness for you constantly deepens
because every time I see you my heart starts to weaken.
You make everything else appear hollow
where ever you are loveliness is sure to follow.
You shine so bright you cast your own shadow
a beauty that others would love to borrow.
But try as they might your beauty they will never catch
because something like you they could never match.
Your beauty seems to increase with every breathe
it tests the limits my imagination can stretch.
It makes me question if what I am seeing is real
I only know it is true by the way that I feel.
Your beauty is so vast it can't be concealed
there is no hiding it your beauty is always revealed.
The power of your beauty is the world's greatest gift
the heaviest boulder it could easily lift.
A girl this perfect I never knew
all that changed the moment I met you.
Heaven on Earth I was not aware
until I met a girl that was crafted with such care.
You would be the answer to a prayer
if someone asked for something rare with beauty to spare.
If I had a choice I would choose this girl over air
for air can't compare to a girl not found elsewhere
A contest entry
- Picture prompt of a beauty by Ziola.
750 points, ended December 12, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Portrait Poetry - Female by Polaja.
1400 points, ended December 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, this was really good. The rhythm and rhyming were superb! Great job in the contest too. This was a beautiful write, keep it up.
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Thank you for entering my contest with this poem
this is an interesting poem of beauty - I like the rhythm that you have and the last lines were touching
Keep writing
Polly
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beautifully writen. and my girl is just that, the air i breathe. thank you so much for sharing this peice
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Excellent one! I doubt you would want this in the oracle, but it is just so great.... pleased to hear something new
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