in bubble gum land
their are tiny children who run and play and jump all day
they love to eat there bubble gum day in and day out
running threw the feilds is sally
sally sees her best friend dave
she takes his hand and he takes hers to live
forever in the wonderful land of bubble gum dreams
A contest entry
- Bubble Gum Dreams by Sunshine Princess.
700 points, ended December 4, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is a poem of how a friend made me fell agian
Comments
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This is a peculiar image you used yet it is a powerful impact you brought..wonderful task you did..well done..
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wow,
i think this was a page out of my childhood.
lol
good luck in the contest.
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I like your poem
I like to live in bubble gum land thank you for writing poem have nice day -
"in bubble gum land
there are tiny children who run and play and jump all day
they love to eat their bubble gum day in and day out
running through the fields is sally
sally sees her best friend dave
she takes his hand and he takes hers to live
forever in the wonderful land of bubble gum dreams"
Corrected the spelling for you. Otherwise this is cute.
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Very cute, well done. Thank you for enetering ^_^
Good luck in the contest
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