I'm going to jump
there's no stoping me now
but you showed up
and you saved me somehow
(you got me away from the edge)
kept me from falling
falling away away from you
and you're with me
so this is something new
Chorus:
so don't leave me
i sound so greedy
i want you here
to kill the fear
so pick me up
and fly me away from here
take it away
just take away the fear
of jumping and fallling
you shine a light through the darkness
to find me stuck and hidden in a mess
and if i ever did lose you somehow
i swear i'd jump from the building now
(chorus)
(so don't leave me)
you can keep me far away from the edge
(i sound so greey)
the building's so high from down here, i pledge
(i want you here)
to never be the same as i was before
(to kill the fear)
rather than the top, i'm on the bottom floor
(chorus)
it may sound like i'm in a hurry
but i don't ever want to worry
about jumping and falling away from you...
Author notes
This was a song that i wrote for my boyfriend. he seemed to like it. but i know there's everything that needs to be changed about this. please read it over and give me the best feedback that you can. i would really, really appreciate it.
if you would like to put in your own lines into the poem, go ahead, tell me and i'll try to put them in there, if they make it sound better of course.....i just want to be better at what i do, that's all.
oh and another problem i have is my placing of words and my spelling, so please don't get mad if something is spelled wrong.....cause i know there is!!
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