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Make A Joyful Noise

Rapt in the beauty of this Man,

my heart swelled with each beat.

The genesis of my faith

formed in the depths of my soul,

as He taught me how to believe.

 

Compassionate and replete with love,

His desire only to give.

His promise of life is to everyone,

though many turn away,

denouncing the truth of His word.

 

Elated by His forgiveness,

in my salvation I proclaim Him.

Glorifying His holiness,

as I make a joyful noise

unto my Lord.

 

 

 

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with humble applause

In a list

A contest entry

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  • daviscth silver member
    January 23

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    This is just so beautiful and the purple background only adds to the imagery in your words. Congratulations on the silver cup dear.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 2

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    You are very wise while wording your inner philosophy in a poetic form..a wonderful work indeed ..showing its greatness as well..well done..

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    This is wonderfully done, you state your beliefs clearly and lovingly - I adore that.

    Thank you for your entry.


  • Malabu
    December 6, 2008

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    what could be more humble than this praise to a man, never seen,heard or touched,
    it is with un-dying love and with true belief do you sing this song with thankful heart...beautifully


  • Vickie J
    December 3, 2008

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    You write from the heart with such beautiful expression. I wonder what your position will be in Heaven-God may call on you to give an inspired word for the day-you never know-I think He encourages to use the talents He's given us not only for now, but in eternity as well. I know that He's aware of every piece you/ve written for HIm-look He gave David a whole book in the Old Testament-so I wouldn't be surprised if He's collecting your work in a book in Heaven to be read over and over.
    Love, love, love you!!!!!!!


  • Denerica
    December 3, 2008

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    Humbleness and admiration go hand and hand, and do just that make a joyful nice, beautiful! Blessings

  • jodygirl
    December 3, 2008

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    What a perfectly "humble applause" you have given to Him. Your words exemplify your feelings for Him and become loving thoughts and prayers. Congratulations on another beautifully written poem. Best of luck in this contest.
    In God's Love,
    Joan

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