Dig & Ditch
Bury the bitch
Steal his soul
Let him unfold
Revealing truth
Many are moved
At how he is fake
He steals; he takes
Hearts so pure
Now unsure
Take him down
Soul underground
Author notes
fast paced, how i like it.
funny story behind this one. ask?
A contest entry
- Make it hurt... by Ifyoulovemekillme.
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Girls 2 men 0 now, but Looks like you took him down with you I guess, how about that for self sacrificial? Nice insight
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wondefful
I loved this. fantastic rhyming as well :]
-JM<3
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i liked this one, and yes fast paced is a good thing.
it makes the words even sharper.
so what's the story?
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Lovely my dear, and by the way did I tell you?
I saw that beotch in the hallway today and totally tripped him haha he is such a loser!
Just thought I'd let ya know hun
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tee hee :] good!
oh and, itd be nice if youd trip the beotch girl too. TRASHlynn..haha
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a lot
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i like your style.
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thank you dear <3
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Ouch. I like it. It's one I can relate to my own life. Seems like many can take it a lot of different ways. Whats the story behind this? I like the fast paced flow it has. Its like that would be the way he is too.
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faced paced, my favorite :] ill message you what happened
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Some machine-gun delivery with this one. Hard, fast, and brutal. Well done.
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just how i like it :]
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oooo violent, i like it
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yesyes, my writes have been very violent lately, haha
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Ah, I like it. Oh how I wish this reminds me of some people in my own life. I like how it was so well readable and stufff. =)
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thank you bby giiirl
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Your welcome.
And omg, my mind is totally not there today!
I don't know why I put the "I wish" in that comment;
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haha tis okay. i was like..uhh what? when i read that but i figured you just made a typo or something.
silly girl :] -
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Yeah, Ha. =)
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