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Second Chance

I tried so long ago,

to end this life of mine.

But I didn't succeed.

I never succeed.

So I had a second chance,

but I ruined everything,

and God won't smile upon me,

if I try again...

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  • momwitzman
    December 4, 2008

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    You didn't succeed for a reason. You are meant to be here. God will smile on you, maybe that is why I am here, for you to see God smile on you.


  • Dark Prince Chaos
    December 2, 2008
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    allwase try again it's human nature keep moveing forword tast fear and force it if you have to