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Free

I want to be free

No more agony

I want to be free.

Can you free me?

I want to be free,

don't you see?

Take the gun

I promise I won't run

Don't stop shooting,

until I'm no longer breathing...

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...Sigh...

What do you think? Anything I can work on?

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