Standing off from the crowd,
you are there, mostly misunderstood.
Your eyes meet mine and the chatter
around us is enveloped by eternity
My mind screams to yours
“Take my hand and find me there”
Gauging the distance my souls leaps to yours
your smile pirouettes around my senses.
Instantly I feel safe inside your canopy of silence.
Looking in your eyes, the golden hues of love are
so profound that your heart instantly appropriates mine.
With my face inches from yours, there is comfort in the
knowing what is right, what is real, what is just.
Your mouth searches for mine.
Keeping my eyes open I see the faint smile,
and perfect is the last thought that travels my sanity. Your lips feather against mine.
Looking up, I see you.
Standing off from the crowd.
Author notes
First time that I have tried to seduce someone with just mere words.
A contest entry
- Seduction of the mind. Females Preferred. by HomeGrown.
1000 points, ended December 26, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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truly beautiful....
you paint a picture with your words... love it...
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I like it, and it works as a seduction, well done
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Well, it may be your first attempt, but never let it be your last. It's actually a splendid piece, really. I mean,
Your lips feather against mine.
It's stunning. It's radiant. it's, it's...
your smile pirouettes around my senses
Wow.
HG
P.S.
Best of luck in the contest.
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