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You have to allow the glass to crack in order to breathe

Ballistics break yonder domed city

not dooming but placing at leisure.

Though initial cracks show like death

quickening what is in the chest;

truth is granted citizenry.

 

Outside air must be mingled with

the mundane which is known so well;

even at risk of invasions

by unknown factors frightening.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

“In order to live free and happily you must sacrifice boredom. It is not always an easy sacrifice.” ~Richard Bach

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 16, 2008

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    now here we have where the marker gets put up a peg or two. What an amazing write. Very apt towards the prompt pic too and taking us from the boredom like state of domed existance to one of unknown certainty. Breath deep the dawning of new days and let us spill forth to pastures untraveled by man and minds. Splendid write and a worthy entry.


  • Topaze
    December 3, 2008
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    Well done, my best wishes.


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 2, 2008

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    You are beginning to have sort of Panic!-esque titles lol. I like that! So well articulated you are sir... How ever shall one truly critique THAT!? Nicely penned!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    Wow! This is great bro!
    Another wonderful thought that you have
    penned here. Good luck to you with this
    one and thanks a lot for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • butterflywriter
    December 2, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    This so precisely speaks to a current situation I am experiencing. Thanks for the smile, good luck in the contest.


  • Angelflower
    December 2, 2008

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    you always reach out with your writes.. you did such a great job.

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