So...
three weeks.
Three weeks - and you decide to tell me
you have regrets,
and how you still have feelings for me,
and to please get out of your head -
you say this,
after telling me you are leaving with someone else
THREE WEEKS after you left me
because you wanted to be "alone"
You insult me with your gall -
I see you for who you are -
a liar with no substance,
only charm,
but even its fraudulence fades
and I'm left with the pungent smell
of your mutilating touch
Hate would be too powerful,
to say I felt it for you -
You left me in pieces,
and smiled at my downfall -
thinking all the while
"finally - emotion"
but those were fifteen minutes
of your glory -
and you'll never see another tear
for you
ever.
You were a waste of time,
energy...
a waste of heart.
And I am so much better off.
I wish you well with your new girlfriend,
and I'll be praying that you don't do the same to her
as you did to me.
Because no one deserves the fatal illness
that is your love.
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awfully accusitory
with out present evidance
I'm guessing the criminal lover
hurt the other to get an emotional response -
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there is PLENTY of evidence. an over-abundance, really.
This wasn't really a poem per se. It was me venting.
The crimal lover probably hurt the other for an emotional response, because the victim never really showed emotion. But mostly, in retrospect... the criminal lover hurt the other because it is his nature to be an untrustworthy bastard that doesn't know what it means when they say they love someone... that doesn't understand that when you (the criminal) tell someone you love them(the victim) and that you want to spend the rest of your life with them, if you leave them for someone else, it totally voids all the garbage that you (The criminal) ever told them. and the criminal gives up all rights on saying "i love you" or "i miss you" because it's pointless... a waste of breath and time, to ever say that again, when you have so clearly demonstrated that your words have no value because you spit them out at random to fill the empty spaces -
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making future plans based on staying together would be ruined
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powerful.
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Wow. This really bleeds, and I say that in the most uncliche way possible. This is brilliant. Rich, layered, it has depth and conviction. It's strong, but the strength of emotions steps back to let your literary prowess shine through.
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