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Evolution or Creation?

Ears,mouth,lungs,heart
each grounded in its perfect location
the earth on it's great axel spins,
yet doesn't shift from its precise position


emerce yourself in the wonders around
the exorbitant colours and manifold of sounds,
from the exquisite view of  the peacock's tail,
to the melodious hums of the great blue whale


condescend and take a look at the ant colony,
such organisation is far beyond me

the oceans have no borders do they ?

but yet from their constraints they dont stray...

 

 

 exchange of exhausts is what sustains our existance,

 plants and humans-dependance,yet providance!

 

 

evolution? I think not!
these mind boggling instricasies

are the molecules of a genius' plot..

 

 

 

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  • skilter
    April 7

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    oh i'm forever sold. it does not take much to realize what is truth when you open your eyes to the world around.

    great write!


    • Mrs D
      April 8
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      thnkx for reading and commenting ...appreciate it ..


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    February 12

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    Great stuff!!!

    Thoughtful, honest & faithful...
    Great narrative, rhythm & flow...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • Beret55 silver member
    February 4

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    I agree, hapenstance could never come up with the things we are and the things that are.
    It has to be Creation.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    January 28

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    A lovely piece with excellent use of imagery and emotion. I enjoyed the deep thoughts within and the majesty of creation that you so wonderfully described and asked us to ponder. Thanks for the great entry. Hugs, Bunny


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    January 26

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    hehe I like this; the layout is beuatiful and the flow is good. The message you put across is true; my fave line is

    condescend and take a look at the ant colony,
    such organisation is far beyond me

    goodluck in the contest

  • Well said, my friend. Truly creation DOES declare his majesty. You have done a beautiful job here with excellent proofs for your truth. A Genius plot, indeed! Well done, poet.


    • Mrs D
      January 23
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      thanks for readig and commenst .....people most times take this universe and its exqusite design for granted ....thinking it came about by chance...ne way thanks again for appreciating this ..

  • Rajaram
    January 19

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    Great write dear. Keep penning such wonders. I would be happy if you could spare some time to stamp your impressions on my poems too.

  • Rajaram
    January 19
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    Mmm... how to make it? Scientific or philowsophical. This is one kind of a poem which is scientifically philosophical. A rare idea. Keep penning such wonderful poems dear. It is a real treat to see the metaphorical representations. I predict that you are from India. I am proud.


    • Mrs D
      January 19
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      thank you so much for reading and glad you liked it ....sorry but im not from india...(the caribbean)...
      i sure will give your poems a read when i get a lil time !

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