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A Secret Far Away Place

Somewhere off in the distance,
Lies a place my mind drifts off to,
Lost in the darkness of space,
My security,
And secret place.

It is full of color,
Pinks, purples, and blues,
Stars surrounding this shroud,
Shining brightly,
Radiating their light,
As the colors wisp across the space,
As a horse shaking its tail,
And near the center of this place,
Lies a head,
A head that is full of darkness,
Protecting the colors,
Watching over the stars.

Inside this shroud
Full of wonder,
Beauty,
And splendor,
Magnificent with all the secrets,
Violent storms rage within,
Gases exploding,
Stars forming,
Clouds rolling,
And yet there is a sense of tranquility,
Of peace,
And calmness,
A place where my mind travels to,
To it's secret far away place,
That lies beyond the horizon,
In the deepness of space,
Full of color,
Pinks, purples, and blues.

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http://www.noao.edu/image_gallery/images/d4/horsehead.jpg

Here's the image of this far away secret place. It's called the Horsehead Nebula.

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  • my darken regrets
    December 4, 2008

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    this is a great poem, i love how you decribe your "happy place"
    or whatever you call it, it sounds like a
    very beautiful place and im glad you decided to show all of us that.. very good!!


  • Rhythm Child
    December 3, 2008

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    Thankyou for taking part
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    take care

    Rhythm Child
    (Billy)