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not one friend,

no one to be there,

no one to trust




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"write a short poem 10-15 words about pain, heartbreak, addiction"

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  • Candy6
    December 2, 2008
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    Gosh, it's sad. This is how I feel.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    These words prompt
    a hug across the miles.
    So sad!!1


  • Blueskywonder
    December 2, 2008

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    Oh this does sound painful... i can relate to the feelings of being alone in suffering unable to trust anyone with the emotional issues faced by this mental sollitude. This is such a powerful write for so few words. Well dones

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